Showing love.

Sometimes I wonder why you stay I never seem to know.  Maybe you could tell me why it is you never seem to go? Even true, sincere blind love could surely not be it, no matter how much love you give I never show a bit.  It's not that I don't feel it or that I don't love you too, I love you more than words could say, more than actions could show you.  You're everything I want in life and everything I need, even in a crowded room of girls you're the only one I see.  Never have I felt this way my heart is yours forever, the moment that I first met you my life seemed that much better.  You're more than what I bargained for you make my life complete, whenever you're around you make it hard for me to speak.  I'm lost for words it's hard for me to tell you how I feel, there's no words around to really, truly show my love is real.  Never the less i'll try to still, until the day I die, I'll tell you every single day how perfect you made life.  So here's my heart I give to you to prove my love won't fade, it's yours to keep so lock it up and try to keep it safe <3

Author's Note

Any thoughts and ideas please :)

Reviews

[Nathan James]

Thank you for the reviews. It was in paragraphs but a I wrote it on my iPhone and submitted it from there it went through like this unfortunately. But thank you very much.

[Nikki Richardson]

I like this. I don't like that it's in a paragraph form here because it would flow much better in stanza form with the proper pauses and line-breaks. the words are beautiful though.

[JustSomeGirl]

I'm not great with giving critisism, especially on peoms, but I found this peice really nice and sincere. It definitely fits in with the tags, I enjoyed reading it. Well done! :D