The silence is the friend in which I have the most faith Because I know for sure that it won't ever give me away.
I really dislike these so-called "talks" Where I ever tell you - nothing at all. I won't admit anything to noone. Couldn't you just leave me alone? ~~~~~ Because if you think I would confess, Admit my failures, admit my weakness Then you couldn't be expecting less: Your undertaking will meet no success ~~~~~ For I rather speak to the silence Because it's such a faithful friend One that never lies, decieves or betrays: I know the silence won't give me away ~~~~~ To the silence, I can talk about my problems With the silence, I can share my many secrets Fully knowing I can do so without any regrets Because I know it will keep each one of them For the silence is an utterly secretive one The most reticent that I have ever known. ~~~~~ The silence won't ever frustrate my faith, Won't pass on anything I secretively say It wouldn't ever put my secrets on display Because the silence gives nothing away. ~~~
First and originally posted on Quizilla, 29th of December 2010.
Slightly edited, but not much.
Dedicated to: The silence.
This poem is quite significant, because it marks the end of ... something.
After I published this, I didn't publish anything for about 4 months. Then I broke the silence. But ever since, I haven't really finished much of what I wrote.
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On each work you post you never fail to impress me. The silence does give nothing away but it doesn't give anything back. Trust is a difficult thing when it is put into the wrong person but with the right one it is rewarding. There is sadness underneath as well as if the person wanted to talk but was afraid to. Very nice as usual! :)
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And your analysis is 100 percent correct!
Befriendi.. read moreThank you very much for your review!
And your analysis is 100 percent correct!
Befriending silence and solitude does go hand in hand, and though both are undoubtedly faithful friends, they are not very helpful nor are there any benefits.
It does require courage to break the silence, and with all my heart I hope anybody who is too scared to open their mouth will find the strength to do so eventually.
I really like this poem, it reads really well and you get the emotion across excellently! But you can talk to me you know I wouldn't tell your secrets or anything :) love youuu and wow I haven't been on here in ages!!!!! Take care speak soon hopefully :P xxxxxxx