Come back home to my heart

Let me fix your broken heart

and wipe away your tears.

let me hold you to stop your painful thinking

and warm your freezing hands.

look me in the eyes

tell me you love and believe me.

i will stop the waves of pain

and hold back the fighting

and pounding rain of tears.

i will silence the anger

and stop the constant flash of regret and sadness.

let me end the lies that tell you that we should not be.

talk to me and end the silence

and le my love end the blinding darkness

to the end of time my love...

 

Reviews

[IonaFaith]

They were written on consecutive days and seem to tell a story, even though they're al quite different in style, I think that helps though, almost as though your writing style changed as your emotions did. Very clever if it was intentional :)

[Lover Of Words]

Very good

[beautiful dreamer]

very very good.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda..]

:D very good

[Nate Theisen]

not as good as yours

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

well to tell you the truth I started out the same as you write right now, if you keep writing you will become good like me maybe better :D If you want I can help thee