Good Bye my love

my vains are full of hate

i got blood in my eyes

nights are never the same

 

you can keep the sunshine

and save me the rain

i hurt but never found

 

i would lay down and die in your arms

now u are holdin me down tryin to stop me from breathin

you belived a lie and loook were it got us

i guess its time to say goodbye :'(

Reviews

[beautiful dreamer]

very good poem

[Janice Fronek(red.panda..]

beautiful :) there's a lil rhyming in this one and i like it

[beautiful dreamer]

i love rhyming. i can't NOT rhyme.