Bursting Light on Smouldering Horizons

Collaboration between myself and Gary H.

 

Light of my life bursts through bright morning sky
Shining so bright, know I am always nearby
Touching my soul, so desperate to fly
Through endless horizons, up in stratospheres so high

Cottonbud clouds shroud past regrets,
Magical hues of amourous golden rays
Holding thumbs for when we first met
Touching the face of my beloved far away.

Soft breeze of passion sees love swimming in the air
Vibrant winds craft our spirits as one
Hands express pure gentleness running through your hair
In soft crimson luminosity the sun sets to stun

Mischevious golden waves of inviting amber rays
Rainbow coloured butterflies sending honey kisses
Forever on fire, we dance, pulsate and sway
Flickering, fluttering through feelings of bliss

Smouldering skin, senuorous shoulders burn
Beating hearts between us feeling so close
Heat of the day says we never learn
Wanting you so much, thoughts to engross.

Eyes move in places never caught in the shade
Desire alive within soft splendorous airs
Love breathes forever in a breeze that never fades
Caught in a tender embrace forever shared

Sometimes sad raindrops explode on the pavement
Silent, foreboding washing away life
Watching them land sparkling with wry amusement
Deepening greys destructive sickening strife

Destiny will save us, locked within stares
Cries of the night birds fill the darkened hue
Flavours explode incandesecent with flair
Glimmering delights shine refelections of you

Fancies and musings of shimmering moonbeams
We are intimately touching in so many ways
Together at night in adoring dreams
Loving sighs always end our divided days

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

So we thought seeing that both our pieces seemed so closely connected we would join them and see what happens. Hope you all enjoy!

Reviews

[Candle in the wind]

The two have blended into one and cant be distinguished as seperate entities.The images are very vivid andexude a certain glow the poem has its own rhytm and melody.
"soft crimson luminosity " is a beautiful sensual expression.The wind seems vibrant with the sound of heartbeats and the hues and shades blend so well.

[Selena Chapman]

Hmm, this is a tough call. Both poems are beautiful on their own, but become a different animal altogether when blended. I love the way you blended the photo's together, by the way, very lovely. I like the two works separately though they can work as a cohesive whole without anyone being able to tell that they are not written by the same hand.... I feel a difference in the energy of the words from one line to another, but thats just me :) You two work well together.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Beautiful! Splendid read. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Gandré]

So very pretty, I enjoyed very much, this was shining, I even felt fire, warmth, I truly thought wow ! There was suspense,
everything, I didn't know where it is taking me...a poem to remember! Congrat.

[pal]

wonderful.. a nice intertwine
pal

[Abi Smith]

your joint work is always so intense. Its funny you guys wrote two different peices and they fit together like a glove. again, your use of words is excellent and i feel at peace at the end of this poem.

[~Wandering Soul~]

these two blend together so well it is so hard to tell they are written seperately. if not for the change in clour of the lines i would have thoguht it had been written joined from the start lol.
this is amazing you both hav a talent for writting amazingly beautiful peices and combining that just brings it out strionger i love it
thanx 4 sharing
xx

[Phil & Bren's Colla..]

Wonderful blend of works, they go together perfectly. It is a very romantic poem. Beautifully penned you two. Great collaboration.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

It is such a beauty.. love the red and orange text.. this is such a romantic poem... i love it .. has a sadness to it also to me .. very good you two.

Chloe
xoxo

[Celtic Cat]

Right you are. Written separately...they melded together so seemlessly. This feels like such an otherworldly place....so dreamy, so poetic. Very good, very good.

[Lafayette]

Loved it! You should do more together