Smouldering Horizons

Shining so bright, know I am always nearby
Through endless horizons, up in stratospheres so high
Magical hues of amourous golden rays
Touching the face of my beloved far away.

Vibrant winds craft our spirits as one
In soft crimson luminosity the sun sets to stun
Rainbow coloured butterflies sending honey kisses
Flickering, fluttering through feelings of bliss

Beating hearts between us feeling so close
Wanting you so much, thoughts to engross.
Desire alive within soft splendorous airs
Caught in a tender embrace forever shared

Silent, foreboding washing away life
Deepening greys destructive sickening strife
Cries of the night birds fill the darkened hue
Glimmering delights shine refelections of you

We are intimately touching in so many ways
Loving sighs always end our divided days

 

Reviews

[Bubo]

A stunningly beautiful romantic piece, of deep emotions , and days are endeed divided making it sad too..........

Shining so bright, know I am always nearby
Through endless horizons, up in stratospheres so high
Magical hues of amourous golden rays
Touching the face of my beloved far away.

Such strong imagary..........and the picture captures the beauty of the thought.

awwww this poem is lovely! There's quite a few ways to interpret it as well, however even without contemplating it it's flow is sweet and almos tuneful :) whether in your head OR out loud :) (I'll refrain from reading it out loud at the moment because I don't want to look silly where I am :P):
"In soft crimson luminosity the sun sets to stun"
That line is just lovely- perfect :)
Well Done- this is a great piece of work x

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow, this is a beautiful poem and the picture is a great addition. Wonderful write!!!

Heather

[George Love]

Very romantic. Well done!

[The Tao of Bri]

spell binding love...no better path and a brilliant poem!~B

[Nicholas Hallows]

Your language use captures the luminous and airy imagery perfectly.

Magical hues of amourous golden rays
Touching the face of my beloved far away.

Vibrant winds craft our spirits as one
In soft crimson luminosity the sun sets to stun

My beloved is far away and so I really relate to these lines.

NH

[Jd Young]

This reminds me of the great Romantic poets during the middle of the eighteenth century. William Wordsworth and William Blake would bow down when they see what great imagery is in this piece. It calms me to even read such a poem with so much energy. I feel in tune with the nature around me, very beautiful Natalie. You are truly at ease with the world around you. Beautiful imagery, well done. Keep up the great work, you deserve an award for this one.

[Laughing Lunatic]

This poem is so beautiful, I absolutely love it, such emotion!!! =)

[thecoolone52]

good good not bad not bad good job

[Megan]

This poem is so beautiful, I absolutely love it, your descriptions are marvelous! It also puts me in a good mood because it hits home with me, my love is all the way in Texas and I am in Ohio at the other end of the country. Thank you for sharing such a great peice of writing.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Such a beautiful poem, Natalie.. read Gary's and it too is lovely .. you sure know how to write my friend .. beautiful descriptions , such emotion .. wish you could sprout wings and just fly .. then sighs would be together on divided days.. very nice !!

Chloe
xoxo