Smouldering Horizons

Shining so bright, know I am always nearby
Through endless horizons, up in stratospheres so high
Magical hues of amourous golden rays
Touching the face of my beloved far away.

Vibrant winds craft our spirits as one
In soft crimson luminosity the sun sets to stun
Rainbow coloured butterflies sending honey kisses
Flickering, fluttering through feelings of bliss

Beating hearts between us feeling so close
Wanting you so much, thoughts to engross.
Desire alive within soft splendorous airs
Caught in a tender embrace forever shared

Silent, foreboding washing away life
Deepening greys destructive sickening strife
Cries of the night birds fill the darkened hue
Glimmering delights shine refelections of you

We are intimately touching in so many ways
Loving sighs always end our divided days

 

Reviews

[Bubo]

A stunningly beautiful romantic piece, of deep emotions , and days are endeed divided making it sad too..........

Shining so bright, know I am always nearby
Through endless horizons, up in stratospheres so high
Magical hues of amourous golden rays
Touching the face of my beloved far away.

Such strong imagary..........and the picture captures the beauty of the thought.

Full of passion! I've read the other poem that goes with this and i think it's worked out very well! By the way the amount of imagery and feelings that come with this pooem and the other one with this is just pouring out! :) Love it!

[Patrica Alvarez]

This amazingly passionate and englightning

[Gandré]

Hello Natalie, what a beautiful piece. I 've read first Gary's piece. What an amazing collaboration. This was making lotuses of butterflies of speech left my tongue and roamed over the skies. I loved

Vibrant winds craft our spirits as one
In soft crimson luminosity the sun sets to stun
Rainbow coloured butterflies sending honey kisses
Flickering, fluttering through feelings of bliss ---------- a wonderful romance it's liking sinking into shadowy seas. great strong piece of work. hope you are well. i miss you.

[Dawn]

This is an amzing piece of how you feel written beautifully.
Well done, and thanks for sharing.
Dawn

[Lily Belle]

As always beautiful. I love reading your writing.

Beating hearts between us feeling so close
Wanting you so much, thoughts to engross.
Desire alive within soft splendorous airs
Caught in a tender embrace forever shared

Amazing...

[James K. Blaylock]

Wow, this is so very beautiful! This was my very favorite stanza...

Vibrant winds craft our spirits as one
In soft crimson luminosity the sun sets to stun
Rainbow coloured butterflies sending honey kisses
Flickering, fluttering through feelings of bliss

jkb

[Phil & Bren's Colla..]

Vibrant winds craft our spirits as one
In soft crimson luminosity the sun sets to stun
Rainbow coloured butterflies sending honey kisses
Flickering, fluttering through feelings of bliss

This is quiet beautiful, the imagery is great . I love it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh how beautiful, two souls connected in a timeless love that no amount of miles can weaken it... so soft and sincere... what a stunning horizon!!

[Nikki]

i love every part of this. you are really good with how you word your poem, i tend to notice poems that have so much potential being slashed and burned because people are to scared to venture out and try different types of writing. i love how your ability is both strong and beautiful. the imagry was wonderful it seemed reading these two poems that its different views of the same instance. you have a beautiful poem here. im impressed.

all the love and such,
Nikki

[Lafayette]

"Silent, foreboding washing away life" The emotion so strong. Loved it!