On the edge of The End

On the edge of crying,

im holding up my ussual front,

your so angry it hurts inide of me,

I can't bare your pain much longer...

A hole has started to grow inside of me,

it hurts, and  it tears me apart.

Slowly.

The tears start to fall down my cheek,

I can't bare this much longer,

you have to find peace or this thing will be fucked up,

in a way I don't know yet, but someday,

Boom!

It all will be gone, exploded in pieces, will never be restored...

Author's Note

honest opinion, please, i have put a lot of feelings n this...

Reviews

[Eloha]

I liked the endings you created, it has a sense of anticipation and reality. Like divorce, could feel like that....I suppose.

[White_lily]

Thank you Eloha :)

[Justin Flume]

I know that i'm fucked up way beyond comparison. Yet, i warned you.
I'm sorry for everything...