Beneath the whiffs

this is something i wrote when i was sitting in the balcony at sunset, i just got inspiration from the air and the atmosphere

Cherish every moment

  Respect every second

     Try to hear the sound beneath the silence

       Try to feel every breath

         Try to capture every sight

 

No matter how tired you are

Or how hard you’re struggling

Always keep a moment

Have your own time  

- I prefer sunset -

To just Lose is all !

Empty your head

  Make it void of worries

Refresh your ideas, your brain

  Set your soul free

 

Just close your eyes

   Sit in silence

     … and feel !

 

Feel the floating emotions in the whiffs

And try to understand what it says

What the air is holding

What the birds are singing

It could be a melody

     a remedy …

Reviews

[NotUsinganymore]

Very pretty poem. It seems like people are nowadays more busy on electronic devices than nature.

[Black Jess]

Thank you ^^
Yep unfortunately :/ let's just hope that someday they will hear the call of nature !

[Chris Shaw]

We all need to step away from our busy lives and slow down to appreciate our natural environment. Sunset is a lovely time to do this. Your lines capture the silence and peace well. Wonderful moments.

I wrote Cocktails at Sunset. When and if you have time take a peep.

Chris

[Black Jess]

I will certainly read your poem *-*
Thanks a lot ^^

[Amanda Moubarak]

so true, we all need a moment is this busy life, a peaceful moment, to just sit and Not think, but Feel and just breathe. beautifully written, well done :)

[Black Jess]

Thank you ^-^

[John the Baptist]

Sounds very much like a form of meditation. What the speaker is saying is be still for a moment, stop struggling and just be. It is amazing how much good such practice can do.

[Black Jess]

yeah ! it's to learn to enjoy the little moments and contemplate and be thankful for everything !