Tied with a hope

 We are tied with a hope that both of us are holding

We are keeping in our hearts our most beautiful dreams

We are lifting the burdens of life , hoping we’ll have a better tomorrow

We are facing the sadness , hoping we’ll get out of sorrow

We keep living this life just because we hope we’ll be together

Even If  It gets tough , we hope we’ll live happily ever after

No matter how it’s hard for us , we keep believing that

We are tied , with a smile , with a hope .

Reviews

[thaleeyaLuna]

I love the positive outlook and mood of this one. Thanks for sharing this. Keep writing! :)

[Black Jess]

Thank you and you're welcome. X)

[William Liston]

I liked the play on words in the title ... it was a clever spin on the phrase "tied with a rope." The title was also clever because of how it reflected this poem's theme ... the phrase "tied with a hope" is a brilliant way of describing a situation where all you're relying on is hope; it really captures the pain that may come with it. You've described your feelings very well. Thanks for sharing.

- William Liston

PS: The word "is" in the first line should say "are." Also, the word "though" in line six should be changed to "tough" ... I think those were typos.

[Black Jess]

Thank you You made my day and Thanks for correcting my mistakes , I didn't focus for '' is '' and It was a typing mistake for '' though '' .

[William Liston]

Glad I could make your day . . .

[Sapientiam]

This is very strong and sentimental. Yes, with hope we can go far. I love how you focus on the beauty of suffering because without it, we could never grow. Refinement is something we should strive towards if we want to live our lives in comfort. Very well done! I loved this!

[Black Jess]

I am so Happy that you liked it , Thank you .

[Black Jess]

I've written this one a very very long time ago but I waited the perfect moment to share it , I waited for the moment when I would live what I wrote , and it's until now , Because now I'm in this situation .