The key

How can i see when my eyes are full of tears ?

How can i feel when my heart is broken ?

How can i live when i have no reason to live for ?

How can i move on when all the doors are shut on my face ?

How can i escape when i’m surrounded by these four walls ?

I searched for the key of the chains that hold me

But i couldn’t find it because it was too dark here

And i was blinded by my tears and my fears

But the key I was looking for was invisible , untouchable

It was inside of me

It was my hope , my confidence and my courage

It was powerful than any other strength

At that moment the four walls fell down

In fact , they never existed , they were just an illusion

They appeared when i was struggling with myself to find the way

At that moment of weakness , I was imagining that i’m surrounded by the four walls

And that it was over I can’t find my way

It was the forces of the darkness that made me feel that way

That’s why I thought i can’t live anymore

I can’t see and feel at all  , i can’t move on

But the power of myself  , my hope and faith was too strong

so it saved me from breaking down and drowning in tears and sadness

The point of this story  is that many people feel broken because they are not strong enough , their emotions are stronger than them , they let their hearts lead them and control them so they imagine more than four walls surrounding them . They imagine the whole world falling above their head , they become in serious problem of depression and in a delicate  situation , They become easy to break , as fragile as a feather . They look for the cure to heal them for a thousand years , but the sad and ugly truth is that they will never find it because it’s inside of them , and it all depends on them , but they will never know . They will never know that they are THE KEY .

Reviews

[Darian B.]

The heart is such a powerful thing. It creates both the tears and fears described as well as the confidence and courage. Sometimes the walls help us protect from outside sadness and sometimes those same walls keep our feelings locked inside instead. I think occasionally it is important to allow ourselves to break down a little and cry so long as we don't allow it to consume us. Truly it is a great poem, with a great message and real feeling. Hold on to the hope, fight for the courage, and never lose faith.

[Black Jess]

I'm glad you recieved the message . and you just said things i didn't write them but i meant them and i like what you said about the four walls . i think what you said completed my poem

[thaleeyaLuna]

Wow. I love the message of this poem, and you've written it so well.
I admire you for writing about this kind of topic which I believe would make others realize (especially those people feeling down or depressed) that they are THE KEY to escaping the situation they are in.
Great job. This is beautiful and worth sharing. :)

[Black Jess]

Thank you very much

[Black Jess]

This is a bit different from what i'm used to write , But it's just free Ideas that come and go to my head And i put them together , so please let me know what you think .