Pain

Inspired from Gunesi Beklerken

sometimes we get hurt

and the pain can last few minutes, or few hours, or years, or even for a lifetime

it all depends on how strong we are

if we’re strong enough we can push away the pain so i won’t last longer

but if we’re so weak and fragile then the pain stays forever

and the hidden feelings in our heart we cannot ignore them , never

This pain erupts our heart

and soon it will be nothing but aches in the air

sometimes the pain we carry is heavier than our souls

that’s why we fall and we can’t move on

Reviews

[Sapientiam]

I agree with this. Some people are more resilient than others and sometimes people want to hold on to those dreadful burdens. But, that's not necessary. Why hurt yourself more when you have a life to live, a life that can be ignited with joy? I believe the more resilient you are, the stronger you are, which leads to happiness. I loved this!

[Black Jess]

I'm glad you loved it , thank you .

[DECIVIL]

It's not always that we are not strong to waive pain or retract it into the back of the mind... A times the cause of the pain makes it terrific and kinda a load to get rid of the pain. We a times prefer to mull over wat transpired. This may lead to long gloomy mood. But in spite of these, life goes on. # nice shot

[LivingDeath]

Emotionally relatable words
"it all depends on how strong we are
if we’re strong enough we can push away the pain so i won’t last longer
but if we’re so weak and fragile then the pain stays forever
and the hidden feelings in our heart we cannot ignore them , never
This pain erupts our heart
and soon it will be nothing but aches in the air
sometimes the pain we carry in heavier than our souls
that’s why we fall and we can’t move on"
I liked this alot.. Honest and heart felt piece. Keep it up.
~Death

[Black Jess]

well you almost wrote the whole poem xD . the last sentence '' sometimes the pain we carry in heavier than our souls , that's why we fall and we cannot move on '' i like to consider it as a
quote . Thank you death :)