Enchanted

This is about a friend who I thought I lost .

I escape to my dreams to see you more

because i can’t see you in the real life anymore

we’re no longer close like before

you shut off on my face all the doors

 

I feel like we are getting further away , everyday

what happened to us ? we used to be best friends

now everything in blown away with the wind

I just want to go back to the old days

when happiness was all we know

how we laughed and shared our dreams

it was real , it wasn’t a show

 

Now i’m trying to understand why you are pushing me away like this

I thought it was because of your problems

so i tried to help

but the more i tried the more you pushed me away

 

Although i was sad I didn’t wish happiness for myself

but i wished it to you

because your happiness brings mine

 

I’m sorry things went this way

But i can’t accept that we’ll be strange

And if it’s the end

I just want to say I was enchanted to meet you

Reviews

[thaleeyaLuna]

A simple, yet beautiful poem that expresses the longing of being with a friend again. This was inspiring in a way, because I saw how you didn't give up on that friend.
On another note, I just noticed the inconsistencies in the use of 'I'. Some are written in capital letters while others are in small letters. And I also saw a typo on the line that says 'I though(t) it was because of your problems.'
But overall, the poem is enchanting in its own way. :)

[Black Jess]

Oh yeah i didn't pay attention to these mistakes but thanks for telling me .glad you liked it

[DECIVIL]

Always feeling of love towards your ex. That's cool.

[Black Jess]

Actually this is not about an ex , it's about a friend and i wrote in the description '' this is about a friend who i thought i lost '' , and by the way i don't have exes

[DECIVIL]

By ex, u took that literally. You lost a friend, I guess that's ex friend. We must let ex means maybe our former boy friends or girl friends. It's still a nice job. But ur saying u never had an ex, sorry if I awoke a thought in u.

[Black Jess]

ahh , you meant ex friend , well we always think about one thing when we hear 'ex' boyfriend or girlfriend x) . it's ok thanks

[Darian B.]

You took the words right out of my mouth, this is almost exactly how I feel about someone right now and you wrote about it so beautifully. Awesome job, it's scary how well I can relate to this :/

[LivingDeath]

Good emotional write.
"I escape to my dreams to see you more
because i can’t see you in the real life anymore"
great vivid lines.
Thanks for the read.
Hope everything gets better for you.
~LivingDeath

[Black Jess]

Thanks a lot , i only write what i feel , what i live and that happened with me but it's ok now don't worry ^^