Trapped

When no one can hear you, when no understands the pain behind that fake smile. Your trapped in a box, but really it feels like your in prison.

Trapped. When you feel like you've just been trapped in a box, all access of freedom has just been locked, people looking at you shocked, as time runs around the clock - tick tock, tick tock! Your face just being parred and mocked, because you got yourself in a cell block, now that you have no place to run to. Thinking, as you start to restock, your life, now you've just been trapped in a box with no locks all access of freedom has just been blocked, because your, Trapped.

Reviews

[promqueen]

the poem is very good. And the picture presents imagery. Good job!

[Naomi]

Thank you so much 😊

[knapp darko]

good idea, I think the writing needs some more work such as you ''ain't got nowhere to run'' could be written better but with more time I think this could be interesting

[Naomi]

Thank you, i appreciate it, what do you think about the new changes made to the poem?

[knapp darko]

yes it reads better now and it is a good poem