Spring Pallete

Spring Pallete

A Poem by Moonie

Paint me in the colors of Spring-
Egg yolk yellow, and
Sugar plum pink.
Turquoise of the clear sky,
and in shades of saffron and honey.
Bordeaux of a butterfly,
sour chardonnay green.

Paint me with a kaleidoscopic pallete
of violet specks and golden hues.
Paint me in fuschia and lime,
in topaz and peacock blue.

Paint me like the spring rains, that draw out
ripeness in Mangoes, Beets and Apricots.
Birthing sweet fat health,
even from corruption and rot.

© 2019 Moonie


Author's Note

Moonie
~A rather quick scribble, meant to keep the muse active~

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THIS IS WONDERFUL. I love the fullness and colorfullness of your metaphors. With each verse I read, I had a delightful picture of all the colors, shapes, sounds and even smells!!
I love it! BTW: nice to have you back :)
PD: I'd give it a score of 110 if I could ;)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

6 Years Ago

Heya!.....i just saw this comment today..dunno how i missed it
Moonie

6 Years Ago

About the song...wow that would be so interesting😍...but it's really not that great of a poem to .. read more
Fernando Dardón

6 Years Ago

Well, simple things can be as beautiful as complicated things, if you know how to use them. Then, ju.. read more



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Beautiful imagery.you have talent for descriptive writing.well done

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much! :))
What a cracking little gem this turned out to be.... cheers for these words.........Neville

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

6 Years Ago

Thanks for visiting! Cheers!
Such sublime poetic shades and hues of you. It is truly a sacred wildness that covers the canvas of spring, and how you make every color a delicious life-giving song. Rise up from winter's death into your sweet life... please.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for this gracious review!
An owl on the moon

6 Years Ago

So hope all is well in your world, dear poet.
dear muse,

you be nice to this sweet lovely girl! the colors are very becoming.

regards,
al

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

6 Years Ago

Hry al, thanks for reviewing this scribble!
Aww!! This made my heart happy!!👏🏻❤️

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

6 Years Ago

Much thanks! ♡
What a simply luscious poem! Sweet and colorful, a treat for the senses.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

6 Years Ago

Thank you!!♡♡

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