Electric love

~Love is like lightening; it is electric!~

Peppermint lips,
Cocoa eyes that could make
even snowflakes melt.
It was 10° outside,
and my palms sweating
from your heat.
Static in the air.
Quarks oscillating.
The crackle of your blue current
lit me up like a christmas tree.
You smiled and asked me about
science
over smoothies...!
I don't know too much, my love.
But if you kiss me,
I can teach you how electricity flows.

Author's Note

Just a scribble to keep the writing going!

Reviews

[Alessander]

Really interesting poem. Has a mix of imagery. On the one side, a tactile seduction one can almost taste. "Cocoa eyes" "peppermint lips" ( IF combined w Christmas tree, feels very Christmas-y) but on the other end a bit more abstract w science and the electricity that connects the visceral with the mental. I esp loved quarks oscillating. Cool phrase! And the last line is both playful and witty.

Cool stuff . thoroughly enjoyed it

[Moonie]

Thank you so much! That was the general idea...i wanted an overall wintery whimsical feel...glad that got through♡ thanks again!

[Periac]

If I ever had someone write this about me I’m pretty sure I would marry them .
Such a bolt of desire.
Thank You

[Moonie]

Hahaha! *giggles* Gee..Thanks so much! ♡

[Alfred Kukitz]

you are like the dream poetess calculating all the rhythms and nuances of love’s moment. love & miss you!

regards,
al

[Moonie]

Thanks again, Al, for the awesome review! Much love!

[An owl on the moon]

Love the sweet wildness of this science, the flavors and colors of electricity pulsing life and love into the air. May you find this lightning always lingering in the melting snows and soft kisses of your world, dear poet. Tender and beautiful.

[Moonie]

Thank you for the stellar review! I appreciate it a lot!

[An owl on the moon]

Hoping one day to have your book in my hands. :)

[Moonie]

That feels so uplifting!!

[An owl on the moon]

Oh, I hope so!!