Whiskey

~just a scribble~

Bronzed skin,
chartreuse eyes.
He kissed like a drop of
sweet sunshine.
Whiskey-sweet taste,
in a champagne glass
of platinum wine.

Author's Note

Whiskey is sunlight held together by water...

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

This happens often. I begin reading your poetry, and I sense the depths of it, and deeper stories all around it, and wish for it to come to life on a page and reveal everything hidden and exposed. Perhaps, if you would be so kind, one day you will weave your words in a book so one can read them again and again. The colors, the feel, the sigh of this moment all speak. “I know some who are constantly drunk on books as other men are drunk on whiskey” ― H.L. Mencken. Pour me another poem, please. :)

[Alessander]

If you want men reading, just write about whiskey! Genius ;)

I liked the comment best actually "whiskey is sunlight held together by water"

But I liked the poem too. Now I need a glass :)

Fun poem. "Chartreuse". Great word.

[Moonie]

Thank you! I really like the word too. Whiskey is nice, but my favourite is vodka

[Gee]

Now you're talking. Take enough to warm the throat, dizzy the head but not so much that you would fight your own shadow.
Love a wee dram...

[Moonie]

Thank you so much, Gee! ♡

[Coyote Poetry]

My kind of poetry. Whiskey in a champagne glass. I like this. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Moonie]

Thank you so much, Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[00000000000000000000000..]

Sounds like a Chris Stapleton - Tennessee Whiskey moment to me:)

[Moonie]

Thank you so much!

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Your very welcome

[Einstein Noodle]

ooooo love that champagne glass of platinum wine!!! with whiskey in it to boot :)))))))) my taste buds are hooting and howling and quivering my dear ;) he sounds like an Adonis ... but we may be getting a little tipsy and not such a good judgement of look ahahahahahaha! i really like this Moon ..well done..pleasant places it brings me..and savory tastes and sensuous kisses .. ahhhhhhhhhhh love ... and spring is here !!!!!!!!!!!! we have our first flowers showing green.
E.

[Periac]

brilliant "scribble"...well described and short
such short work can falter or flourish...here you flourished.....whiskey and a boys lips....I wonder though..was whiskey even involved ultimately in the end of this piece?.....its these great questions that define this piece....great work moon

[Moonie]

Thank you so much for the review!♡

[Gaston Villanueva]

Your deliberate use of colors created an additional layer to your words which was pretty groovy. What an occasion, ha.

[Moonie]

Thank you for the kind review! Glad you liked it!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

I love your poem and your note, both so poetic and well explained and expressed. Tyfs!!!

[Moonie]

Thank you so much for this revuew! Muchly appreciated!

[Moonie]

Review*...

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome! :)