It has been so hot lately, so taking a journey into your winter magic brings a cooling, sweet softness to the day. Visualizing the stirring, frozen world, all in the wondrous cloak of white. There is no enchantment so sacred as waking to this chilled space of light. Beautifully voiced.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you so much for the kind words!!
7 Years Ago
May the moon cover you in everlasting inspiration. :)
It has been so hot lately, so taking a journey into your winter magic brings a cooling, sweet softness to the day. Visualizing the stirring, frozen world, all in the wondrous cloak of white. There is no enchantment so sacred as waking to this chilled space of light. Beautifully voiced.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much for the kind words!!
7 Years Ago
May the moon cover you in everlasting inspiration. :)
breathtaking imagery. i can feel the coldness wrapping that landscape - chilling. opening alliteration grabs you and pulls you in. love the 'magical' last line.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thanks a lot for the review! Appreciated muchly!:))
works very well with nice alliteration enhancing the first line...
i like the moss quivering, shivering...when it should be warm being covered...but every covering is not warmth, is it?
some just leave us freezing beneath.
The haiku itself is very much a personification of you I feel Moons.
Even in your trying of the form you are like the fragrant moss waiting to spring forth from a period of stillness. Nicely done. Congrats.
:)
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
I can always trust you to find a beautiful meaning out of an ordinary situation! :))))
Thanks.. read moreI can always trust you to find a beautiful meaning out of an ordinary situation! :))))
Thanks, Anto!
Hello stranger.
congratulations on your first newborn :)
conjures a nice image of the snow-covered floor of the forest.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Yunno..I read haiku rules over and over again to write one...but I could write this only when inspir.. read moreYunno..I read haiku rules over and over again to write one...but I could write this only when inspiration struck..thanks woody, cheers to my 1st haiku.. ;))
lights up a fine scene in my minds eye ... the magic carpet can be below my feet or above my head ... love that! i think it is an impressive first go at the haiku!!
E.
Thanks for that comment, E. Really hits home!!
And thank you for checking up on me...I'm back.. read moreThanks for that comment, E. Really hits home!!
And thank you for checking up on me...I'm back now.., (hopefully)
Hugs and love!
8 Years Ago
Ps I went through your page...dayum..I have a lot of poems to check out!!
Will be doing it s.. read morePs I went through your page...dayum..I have a lot of poems to check out!!
Will be doing it shortly.. :D
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8 Years Ago
happy to see you back! thank you for all your visits whenever you can :)
E.
If you're a dreamer, come in
If you're a dreamer, a wisher, a liar
A hope er, a pray-er, a magic bean buyer,
If you're a pretender, come sit by my fire
For we have some flax-golden tales to spin
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