Ocean Stories

Ocean Stories

A Poem by Moonie
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~Just a romantic poem~

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To chambers and notches of seaweed,
we can journey, if ever you need
to sleep, hearing the ocean waves.
We would collect the conch shells the sea saves
for lost travellers, like you and me.
We would go together to the foaming sea,
where strange melodies paint images
on the walls of chambers and cages
of the foaming periwinkle sea.
We would go and hear that melody.
When the northern star shall reach out,
and the distant mariner boy would shout,
that it is the time for mermaids to ascend,
we would wait by the caves and hear their voices blend
with the sound of the troubled sea.
Alone, in the silence, only you and me.
When the air is salty and the water hushed, 
we would sleep, wrapped in the golden dust.
Should the cries of the pale skinned sea
ever break our lost rhyming reverie,
we would sing aloud to the moon,
to lull and hush the childish sea soon.
If its promise, the platinum moon shall keep,
we would drown again in our sleep,
and dream beautiful dreams of voices in a shell,
Till the dawn arrives and tinkles the church bells
of some distant, dry, deserted town's core.
We would awake again and be washed ashore.

© 2015 Moonie


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one of the finest poem of the sea i have read here!! one of the finest .. somehow i clicked to listen to the music as i read .. i usually read first so i am not distracted .. but this piece swims together, music and word ... i feel like kelp in serenade with the current and the moon .. enchanting and beautiful .. well done says i .. well done!!
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

9 Years Ago

What a brilliant review!!! I am flattered, dear E. I truly am! The album "ocean songs" is one of my .. read more
Moonie

9 Years Ago

Ps, my dear ocean star taught me how to include songs here. Kudos to her!!!!........Suck it, technol.. read more



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Should the cries of the pale skinned sea
ever break our lost rhyming reverie,
we would sing aloud to the moon,
to lull and hush the childish sea soon.
Your words are haunting and beautiful...as though one is floating in a dream upon this sea. Lovely writing.
:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

9 Years Ago

Beautiful and haunting, eh?? Woohoo, that's quite a review!!! :) :) Thank you! :)
It's thoughtful and refreshing!🏊🏊🏊🏊
But I very humbly suggest you divide it
into several stanzas, that way, it would
be much more comfortable to read!
Wonderful penning,as always🎆🎇

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

9 Years Ago

Thank you, dearest Sagacious!! :):)
Moonie

9 Years Ago

I wanted the poem to sound like a story, and so I didn't divide it.
Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Awww... I see
I just meant that many lines
need to be contemplated...
So you'd rat.. read more
Very nice, it captured the power, mystery and even the hint of chaos and doom that the Ocean seems to generate for most people. Quite well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind review! :)
A most tantalizing piece that sings of things we can not see, well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the lovely review! :) :)
Beautiful, enchanting, highly imagnative! Loved it to the core!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, sir! I appreciate your kind words. :) :)
Alfred Kukitz

9 Years Ago

Miss,

You can call me Al.
A beautiful and serene poem on the sea. The sleeping, then the awakening. Marvelous...:)..............

Posted 9 Years Ago


Moonie

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Sami sir!! :)
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......
That is so beautiful and soothing. The lull of current, I could just imagine it.
Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much dearie....... I heard you were leaving... you will be mised, dear Ana.... would yo.. read more
Matching Socks

9 Years Ago

Just a break, I have a few things to do still though. Thank you. xo
Breathtakingly beautiful! I too felt the rhythm of the ocean current and the mermaids' song...I'm entranced by the ocean even though I live landlocked in the middle of a huge continent! This write is exquisite in its tranquil, soothing quality.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

9 Years Ago

The ocean... the beautiful ocean... and the moon.. the gorgeous moon.. they inspire me everyday, ma'.. read more
Jennie Baron

9 Years Ago

You're welcome, reading was my pleasure.
Ooo very nice indeed. romantic, sensual and full of the smells of the sea. a gorgeous write, Moon's Daughter.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

9 Years Ago

Hehe, did I just manage to pull your leg instead???? That's one point for me......:) :) hahaha. Did .. read more
Woody

9 Years Ago

I needed to make a wisecrack, can't help it, so the smiles really looked like kisses.
Moonie

9 Years Ago

Haha, yep, of course they did, except the spellings, the word formation, and the sound......atleast .. read more
one of the finest poem of the sea i have read here!! one of the finest .. somehow i clicked to listen to the music as i read .. i usually read first so i am not distracted .. but this piece swims together, music and word ... i feel like kelp in serenade with the current and the moon .. enchanting and beautiful .. well done says i .. well done!!
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

9 Years Ago

What a brilliant review!!! I am flattered, dear E. I truly am! The album "ocean songs" is one of my .. read more
Moonie

9 Years Ago

Ps, my dear ocean star taught me how to include songs here. Kudos to her!!!!........Suck it, technol.. read more

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