one of the finest poem of the sea i have read here!! one of the finest .. somehow i clicked to listen to the music as i read .. i usually read first so i am not distracted .. but this piece swims together, music and word ... i feel like kelp in serenade with the current and the moon .. enchanting and beautiful .. well done says i .. well done!!
E.
Posted 9 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
What a brilliant review!!! I am flattered, dear E. I truly am! The album "ocean songs" is one of my .. read moreWhat a brilliant review!!! I am flattered, dear E. I truly am! The album "ocean songs" is one of my favourite albums, and this song seemed to go well with the poem. Thank you so much!! :) :)
9 Years Ago
Ps, my dear ocean star taught me how to include songs here. Kudos to her!!!!........Suck it, technol.. read morePs, my dear ocean star taught me how to include songs here. Kudos to her!!!!........Suck it, technology!!!
Should the cries of the pale skinned sea
ever break our lost rhyming reverie,
we would sing aloud to the moon,
to lull and hush the childish sea soon.
Your words are haunting and beautiful...as though one is floating in a dream upon this sea. Lovely writing.
:) Julie
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Beautiful and haunting, eh?? Woohoo, that's quite a review!!! :) :) Thank you! :)
It's thoughtful and refreshing!🏊🏊🏊🏊
But I very humbly suggest you divide it
into several stanzas, that way, it would
be much more comfortable to read!
Wonderful penning,as always🎆🎇
I wanted the poem to sound like a story, and so I didn't divide it.
9 Years Ago
Awww... I see
I just meant that many lines
need to be contemplated...
So you'd rat.. read moreAwww... I see
I just meant that many lines
need to be contemplated...
So you'd rather give us the
opportunity to do so by
breaking the continuous writing!
It's all up to you!
You're welcome🌹
That is so beautiful and soothing. The lull of current, I could just imagine it.
Well done!
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much dearie....... I heard you were leaving... you will be mised, dear Ana.... would yo.. read moreThank you so much dearie....... I heard you were leaving... you will be mised, dear Ana.... would you leave permanently or temporarily????
9 Years Ago
Just a break, I have a few things to do still though. Thank you. xo
Breathtakingly beautiful! I too felt the rhythm of the ocean current and the mermaids' song...I'm entranced by the ocean even though I live landlocked in the middle of a huge continent! This write is exquisite in its tranquil, soothing quality.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
The ocean... the beautiful ocean... and the moon.. the gorgeous moon.. they inspire me everyday, ma'.. read moreThe ocean... the beautiful ocean... and the moon.. the gorgeous moon.. they inspire me everyday, ma'am..and now I know, that you too feel a similar pull....thank you for such an encouraging and kind review!!! :) :)
Ooo very nice indeed. romantic, sensual and full of the smells of the sea. a gorgeous write, Moon's Daughter.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Ah, it is always nice to stumble across your reviews, sir! :) :) I insist you should listen to the .. read moreAh, it is always nice to stumble across your reviews, sir! :) :) I insist you should listen to the song as well. It is from one of my all time favorite albums.
9 Years Ago
I'm going to do it right away. was meaning to lisen to it laterr as I'm currently listening to Paul .. read moreI'm going to do it right away. was meaning to lisen to it laterr as I'm currently listening to Paul Simon,but he can wait :)
tell you what I think later.
9 Years Ago
voluptuous!!!! thank you very much. I don't think I've heard it before.
9 Years Ago
I have an odd taste in music. I don't think many have heard that song. I am overjoyed that you like .. read moreI have an odd taste in music. I don't think many have heard that song. I am overjoyed that you like it. :) :) I am sending you ear to ear smiles from here!!!! :)
9 Years Ago
thanks a lot but did they have to be slobbering? ugh. well, thanks anyway :)))
9 Years Ago
I try my best.....expectations....huh....would they ever be satisfied??? :) :D
9 Years Ago
you know I enjoy pulling people's legs. incorrigible, I know.
I acknowledge receipt of your ki.. read moreyou know I enjoy pulling people's legs. incorrigible, I know.
I acknowledge receipt of your kisses. you're so sweet :)
9 Years Ago
It was smiles in the first place......:P
9 Years Ago
hahahahaha s**t s**t s**t!! I meant smiles of course. I'm embarrassed.
Hehe, did I just manage to pull your leg instead???? That's one point for me......:) :) hahaha. Did .. read moreHehe, did I just manage to pull your leg instead???? That's one point for me......:) :) hahaha. Did you misread the word, or did you write kisses by mistake?????
9 Years Ago
I needed to make a wisecrack, can't help it, so the smiles really looked like kisses.
9 Years Ago
Haha, yep, of course they did, except the spellings, the word formation, and the sound......atleast .. read moreHaha, yep, of course they did, except the spellings, the word formation, and the sound......atleast both were in plural....:) :)
one of the finest poem of the sea i have read here!! one of the finest .. somehow i clicked to listen to the music as i read .. i usually read first so i am not distracted .. but this piece swims together, music and word ... i feel like kelp in serenade with the current and the moon .. enchanting and beautiful .. well done says i .. well done!!
E.
Posted 9 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
What a brilliant review!!! I am flattered, dear E. I truly am! The album "ocean songs" is one of my .. read moreWhat a brilliant review!!! I am flattered, dear E. I truly am! The album "ocean songs" is one of my favourite albums, and this song seemed to go well with the poem. Thank you so much!! :) :)
9 Years Ago
Ps, my dear ocean star taught me how to include songs here. Kudos to her!!!!........Suck it, technol.. read morePs, my dear ocean star taught me how to include songs here. Kudos to her!!!!........Suck it, technology!!!
If you're a dreamer, come in
If you're a dreamer, a wisher, a liar
A hope er, a pray-er, a magic bean buyer,
If you're a pretender, come sit by my fire
For we have some flax-golden tales to spin
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