Chaos and champagne

~just a little scribble~

Scattered rhymes would 

fill her poems,

And at times,  they would

resemble assembled

fluff pieces of spring snow, or

maybe you would know

that they were like thrown bridal

confetti coloured

in pink.

Or they would begin

to look like bubbles

bottled in champagne. 

Tottering about,

never settling,

startlingly confused and

over-used.

Would make you muse

on the broader futility

of order.

Author's Note

This one is just a scribble.

Reviews

[Lenah Mehzabin]

well ..this one is making me smile a bit wide ..because i certainty found myself here , it describes a beautiful silly feeling :-) and i like these lines '' Scattered rhymes would
fill her poems,
And at times, they would
resemble assembled'' it made the poem much more pretty as u gave it a nyc start nd i lyk the scribble ..it's something new frm ur collections ,very nyc write :-)

[Moonie]

Oh, thanks babe! You always brighten up my page with your lovely comments! :))

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Aw! thats so sweet .My pleasure ;) . and ur poems are always impressive : )

[The Twin Arenas]

the little graphic there, which, I mean, that's risky business to me, sometimes those things ruin the thing, but your little picture or colors works. nice title. the poem made me think of the big bang or something, which is a nice thing to read about, or feel something for in a poem. nice scribbles.

[Moonie]

Ha, glad that graphic worked out! Thank you for such a lovely comment! Muchly appreciated! :)

[Jennie Baron]

More than just a scribble, I'd say. Beautiful images and language throughout.

[Moonie]

You are always so kind to me, ma'am!!!!!! I love your comments to the moon and back! :) :) Hugs! :)

[Einstein Noodle]

ahaha! i love this very much .. every word .. little word bubbles, of that champagne, tickling the tongue :) the alliteration and rhyme are perfect .. i think this is a strong little "scribble" that broadens my smile with each re-reading .. nice job .. very intelligent, witty and enjoyable!
E.

[Moonie]

I am glad it gave you such a broad smile, dear E. Thanks for brightening up my day!!

[Sam]

Well, a heck of a scribble then if I may say so.

[Moonie]

Ha, thanks a lot for that!! :) :)and yes, you have my full permission to say so!! :D

[FOih;]

the broader futility of order. My favorite line. :)

[Moonie]

Oh my, thank you for taking time to read this. That is one of my favorites too. :) :)

[Woody]

aah this is another fun write.
now, since you admitted it, I can say it without fear of being rebuked. I did notice that sometimes, scattered rhymes would fill your poems and, at times, they would resemble assembled fluff pieces of spring snow or... but read the poem, that's what I think of your scribbles. :)

[Moonie]

Hehe, I knew I should have used "his poems" so as to dismiss all the comparisons. Thanks a lot for the compliment(I am guessing it's a compliment). And yes, my scribbles are pretty chaotic. :))
It always feels good to see your comments on my poems!! :) :)
Hugs! :)

[Woody]

yes it is a compliment. but I like my reviews to be different and, let's face it, silly.
hugs back :)

[Moonie]

Those silly comments are my favorite!!! :):)

[Matching Socks]

OMG, I love this one.
Puts a smile on my face. :D
Your poetry is always a sweet treat. Well done!

[Moonie]

Aah, just what I needed! :)) thank you for the wonderful, wonderful comments. :)

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome! :))