Gingerbread

~gingerbread~

Reviews

[Confuser]

Moon's fairest daughter: Worldly 'junk' can lure the most righteous person away. It is such a beautiful writing. It's packed full of frustration and sadness at the way we allow ourselves to fall into that pit of empty desire. The metaphor of gingerbread men is brilliant, and unfortunately greed leads the way for too many. 'But not for free love' is so profound, but it does exist, I believe. For everything to be transparent: honesty and kindness to be in the forefront of our mind would change the world. Every line is a plea for hope. Your ending is beautiful. Great writing & Congratulations. Well deserved. Thank you so very much! Dale

[Moonie]

Hello, Dale! It's very nice to meet you.... I look forward to reading your work too. :))
Thank you for the lovely review! I feel truly humbled.... :))

[Confuser]

Hello to you Moon's fairest daughter: You are so kind! I am a novice; you're so so talented!!! You're welcome, but THANK YOU for the beautiful poem. Bravo!

[Moonie]

Thank you, Dale!! I have no words left to express my gratitude. :))
it feels so good to be appreciated by as great a poet as you..
Love and hugs (the autocorrect changed it to bugs initially, thank god I changed it back!!!)

[Confuser]

That's for sure...Mosquito's have taken over here!!! Thanks/you'll see grammar errors in my poetry; sorry; need to find time to correct & will - thank you sweet lady!

[Jennie Baron]

Profound and very beautifully stated. Impressive, Moon!

[Moonie]

Thank you very much, Jennie ma'am! I am glad it impressed you. :))

[Frieda P]

I don't know how you made gingerbread men make sense of our shortcomings, but it worked! Very clever Moon...but you can't catch me. :)

[Moonie]

Hahaha! :)) I am glad you liked the comparison!

[Frieda P]

It was pretty ingenious for a cookie! ;)

[willweb]

I really enjoyed this poem. I found the message but it was so beautifully delivered, I was lost in your words for a while.

[Moonie]

Oh wow, such lovely words!!!:))

[Eddie Davis]

Wonderfully said and so very true, a great poem.

[Moonie]

Indeed! Thanks for reviewing, dearie!

[Matching Socks]

Love the way you presented this.
So true, we do 'sugar coat' things too much.
Some people are very 'made up'

[Moonie]

Thanks for such a sweet review, lovie! :))

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. You write about life and real world with realistic thoughts and terms. So many statements stood out. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. Always a pleasure to read your words and thoughts.
Coyote

[Moonie]

Thank you very much, dearest Coyote! I am happy to hear that you enjoyed it! :))

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.