Behind Blue Eyes.

Behind Blue Eyes.

A Poem by +Naomi+
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Behind blue eyes, There lies a sea of tears
that has welled up through all these years.
She'll smile and blow him kisses,
but she's dying alone inside.
She's too afraid of seeming weak.

Behind brown eyes, fountains overflow silently.
She hides through dark clothes and bracelets,
hiding her cuts from the world around her.
She's too afraid of being judged.

Behind green eyes, there lies a genius,
through and through.
She sees the world from a different angle
and has kept quiet all these years.
Nothing can stop her tears.
She's too afraid of being misunderstood.

Blue, Brown, Gray, Green..
We all feel misunderstood sometimes.
But we hide it all and keep it locked in tight,
only allowed us to break down alone.

Keep your head held high and be strong.
You'll get through it,
even if it seems only to get worse..

© 2011 +Naomi+


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love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


absoutely loved this poem. we all have troubles.. we all hide behind a mask; thank you for the post. i can relate to this very very well!


Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this. All of it, it's a beautiful poem, that came from an even more beautiful poet (:
All of your writing is amamzing, and it's inspiring.. And it makes me want to be even better, cause when I read your stuff I feel like I can. So thank you, and never stop, or I'll cut you kindly (: lol
I love you Naomi. :D
100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


this was really good, I like it good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very good poem. Need larger letters for us old people. You words are true in the poem.
"Keep your head held high and be strong.
You'll get through it,
even if it seems only to get worse.."
Very good wisdom is this excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


But we hide it all and keep it locked in tight,
only allowed us to break down alone.
Ya....ya we do. Great write, emotion and feeling for sure.

Posted 13 Years Ago


There is a surprising wisdom in the words of this poem.
I loved the insight into the human spirit.

Posted 13 Years Ago


great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love the colour scheme, that is there for a purpose!!! And each stanza is perfect, wow!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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+Naomi+

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