Scars.

I need to know if I can trust you.

I need to know that you won't hurt me.

My wrists are pained enough in addicting sin.

My life is pushed to the edge each time.

Walk with me on the trail of forgiveness.

I'm sorry if I trip off the edge.

Just promise not to let me fall all the way down.

Grab my arm, pull me up, Never let me go..

Hold me till my pain drifts away from me.

The scars live as souvenirs do.

Proof of what happened.

You can stop the scars from adding up,

if only you cared if they did..

>.<

Author's Note

About a guy..No one knows I like him and Im not sure I want to tell people I do..

Reviews

[kaylynnmelody♥]

very emotional.

[light and ashes]

Beautiful, I love this. The second stanza is my favorite.

[A Risen Heroine.]

I really like this poem...
I could relate at once..

Very well done!

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Larrycall]

I WROTE A POEM close to this one please read it . it will make u cry or watch it on youtube: http://youtu.be/AsVEHKGRxQM copy and paste it

[CharlesMonroe]

I know who it is!!!! And he can't do this, I mean, he's to immature, he's a player.. He's like Josh and theres no way I'm gonna stand by and watch you get hurt again by another d****e. Because you're worth waaaaaay more than that. I know you are, everybody knows you are... Now you just need to know it. I love you babe!

[Samantha Heaton]

Naomi, This was awesome... and you can tell me who it is, even if i dont know who the heck it isXD

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. Scars on body and mind are the honored wounds of a life of learning and trying to find happiness. Few people are allowed in. To understand the pain and loss of a life. I like the ending to the outstanding poem.
"The scars live as souvenirs do.
Proof of what happened.
You can stop the scars from adding up,
if only you cared if they did.."
Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Sabrina Demartini]

wonderful just wonderful, i loved this poem

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Naomi, a beautiful poem, simply love it, 'bout wanting someone, who knows maybe in a roundabout way it may work out :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I knew the nicest girl who one day rested her hand on her chin...unknowingly exposing the scars...rows of perfectly parallel scars. Now I understand about
the scars from the inside and out. Powerful imagery.