Nightmare.

Nightmare.

A Poem by +Naomi+
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My Dream

Help me.
Help me please.
Big black bugs crawling all over me,
I can feel them roaming over my skin
and under my skin.

I stretch out a piece on my arm
with my thumb and index finger.
I can see them.
Little black smudges squishing
their way through me.

They're eating me.
Each takes a little pinch of a bite
every millisecond that passes.
I can feel myself being eaten away..

It hurts..
A twisting pain haunts me as I fall to my knees.
My spine is lodged in a weird position 
and I cannot move.
The bugs continue to nibble away,
their tiny sharp white teeth munching on me.
My skin is close to gone completely
and I am a living blood-red corpse.
Hints of skull are showing as I murmur one last word.
"Help.." Is all I can say as I take my final gasp of air.

And I lay there,
on the cold wood floor beside my bed.
Blankets lay twisted and stained.
The bugs remain, eating away the rest of my dead body.

What made this dream so terrifying was..
You where sitting right next to me the whole time
with a smug little smile on your pinched up face.

© 2011 +Naomi+


Author's Note

+Naomi+
Yes, I really dreamed this, and I woke shocked.
My heart was beating really freaking fast and I thought I was going to have a heart attack...
The first thing I checked was my skin. No bugs, thank god. My arm had fallen asleep and was the cause of the tingling through my body. I hate it when things like this happen.

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So vivid. You know it was a crazy dream when you wake up and make sure it wasn't real and you captured that feeling. Good poem


Posted 13 Years Ago


I hate that too. You described this nightmare very well. Great job!
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


I wish I could remember my dreams or will they be nightmares lol.

What a wonderful expression based through poetry of your nightmare :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This dream was creepy...I would have had a panic attack too if I had this dream...That is just creepy. I don't know...scary....that's all I can say...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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