Block Out The World.

Block Out The World.

A Poem by +Naomi+
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Forget these earthly troubles,
The War and The Hate.
Forget Love and Hope,
they're all the same.
Just block out the world,
and swing along to the beat.

Without the rhythm and rhyme,
we'd have no tempo to keep.
We plaster on the false smiles.
The world knows our weaknesses,
Our psychotic cases.

Music is our dream,
With everything
as what we want things to be.
We drift still through rough waters,
the loud booms of life disappearing.
We allow the beat to take control as we give up.

Without music,
We'd be gone.
Music guides your life..
So don't guide it wrong.

© 2011 +Naomi+


Author's Note

+Naomi+
Wrote it in school for a project on our favorite topic.

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music is my life. music is so cool the way that music moves the nations is awesome. i loved this! keep writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Music is just as amazing as this poem is (: Wonderful job as always dear ^_^
And, The Kids Are Gonna Die.... Actually? Everything she writes is good, better than good XD

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was really good actually. I liked it. Could relate.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i agree, if i didnt hav music id go crazy i cant imagine a world without music

Posted 13 Years Ago


It would be cool to be able to hide from life. Even music cannot hide us. Music is a great pleasure to give us peace. I like the way you described your desire and what the music can do for you. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Agree with you music gives us so much! Love how your poem expresses it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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+Naomi+
+Naomi+

Chicago, IL



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