Life: In My Perspective

Life; A test.
Only the fittest of all make it.
Only the best of us get to pass.

Life; A lie.
Treason and Tricks--
Meant to exist only to help push us down.

We suffer through it,
treading through rough tides and broken waters.
Humans destroyed earth in their mission of survival.
What will be destroyed next?
Life as we know it to be?
You?
Me?

Tears flood through open gates,
eyes red from leaking sadness.
"I want to be free!"
She screams helplessly,
the scars on her arms
are shown for all to look and see.
She didn't pass life's test later on...
She was just plain gone.

Life is a way to prove you're worthy.
We may not know what of,
yet we know we have a choice.
That's why Humans are so vulnerable,
so emotional and broken.

Life's a test.
Those who survive with love, will pass on.
Those who die halfway through, I believe,
may receive a second chance.

I want to pass this test of mine,
yet I was given a tough one.
I hate having to deal with so much.
The burdens hurt as felt,
yet I will refuse to give up this easily.

Good luck guys,
see ya on the other side..

Author's Note

Poem explains it a lot.

Reviews

[CharlesMonroe]

:/
This is sad. I love you Naomiii!!
Your poem is beautiful and it's hopeless, and it's strong and power and it feels like you're giving up. Never give up babe (: you're strong enough to make it through everythign life has to throw at you.

[Samantha Heaton]

This is amazing ... Totally can relate to it good job girl!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Wow deep powerful poem, marvellous write, and like you say hopefully there is something grander waiting for us:)

Yas

[Chloe Is Not Dead]

agreed 100%
if u ever need to talk about ANYYYTTHING then message me. i love you like a sister dude