Life: In My Perspective

Life; A test.
Only the fittest of all make it.
Only the best of us get to pass.

Life; A lie.
Treason and Tricks--
Meant to exist only to help push us down.

We suffer through it,
treading through rough tides and broken waters.
Humans destroyed earth in their mission of survival.
What will be destroyed next?
Life as we know it to be?
You?
Me?

Tears flood through open gates,
eyes red from leaking sadness.
"I want to be free!"
She screams helplessly,
the scars on her arms
are shown for all to look and see.
She didn't pass life's test later on...
She was just plain gone.

Life is a way to prove you're worthy.
We may not know what of,
yet we know we have a choice.
That's why Humans are so vulnerable,
so emotional and broken.

Life's a test.
Those who survive with love, will pass on.
Those who die halfway through, I believe,
may receive a second chance.

I want to pass this test of mine,
yet I was given a tough one.
I hate having to deal with so much.
The burdens hurt as felt,
yet I will refuse to give up this easily.

Good luck guys,
see ya on the other side..

Author's Note

Poem explains it a lot.

Reviews

[kaylynnmelody♥]

Life can be hard sometimes. I'm sorry that you have been through a lot in your life. Thank you for the read request and posting this piece of writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

The worst part. Poem is true. Hard to escape reports and testing. Strong people may fail. But they get up and go forward. I like the complete poem. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Canicus]

I like this. life is like a test I see what you mean ( even though I don't like tests) I agree. good write.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was very sad...and very honest. I loved the emotions within it...but just know you have people that love you...everyone does...even when they don't realize it..

[Saya666]

im about to fail my test Naomi. Actually, i was close. id say this poem helped... And its very nice :)

[Helpless]

totally self explanatory for sure, and yet awesome artist creativity within

[Alicia Hirshey]

Great write.

[frozensakura]

good job... i can relate

[Paradoxical]

wow... I feel the same way.. Great work, I love this :)

[London]

i liked this..nice job!