I Want Out.

I Want Out.

A Poem by +Naomi+
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She breaks just like a little girl and they refuse to see her falling down.
They push and pull at her, pulling her down the path she hates to take.
Those same people are the ones to push her over the cliff, crying so much as she does so.
Why are they crying? Didn't they tell her to do it?
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I try to love myself fully. I try, that's all though.
I never "do" anything to love myself.
"Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem."
Phil Donahue said this, not knowing how many people would actually kill themselves.
I would kill myself, but I have too many people I care about.
I can't leave them here alone. I refuse to desert them now.

© 2011 +Naomi+


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Awh Naomi :/ if you go, I go

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is like a total poem that i relate to! i love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was really emotional...suicide is really never the answer, but I get your point...and I want to commit it too..but I won't because people don't want me too...but they aren't in my shoes at the moment...so they really don't know what I'm feeling and people don't know what your feeling either...but never commit it...because it will destroy someone. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Heartbreaking and emotional write. Take care Naomi :) We all care for you here.

Posted 13 Years Ago


awesome and emotional :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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