The Letter.

The Letter.

A Poem by +Naomi+
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My father,
sent me a letter 
and I received it to find;
He remembers when I first saw a convertible.

When I was a little girl,
I'd yell out the cars we passed.

Black car, Red Truck, Slug bug...

and once we pulled into 
a Walmart parking lot.

I was jumping up and down,
only four years old.
I couldn't catch my breath
and I was screaming my loudest.

My dad almost crashed the car trying to park,
and when he did park,
He threw himself in the backseat
to see what was wrong.

To his surprise I yelled :

"Daddy! That car is without a lid!!" 

We laughed for almost 20 minutes straight.

I thank that's my most missed memory.

© 2011 +Naomi+


Author's Note

+Naomi+
I miss him :

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That's really good and cute but you will see him again some day

Posted 13 Years Ago


this was amazing and beautiful and sad too I really liked it

100/100



Posted 13 Years Ago


very sweet and crushing at the same time! :) love it

Posted 13 Years Ago


The small things and memories we will hold close to our heart. Thank you for the nice story. Parent need love too. My four kids gave me reason and purpose to be alive. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


aww..... very sad but well said

Posted 13 Years Ago


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So adorable, and so sweet. The sadness and happiness are all portrayed deeply. Lovely write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


So sweet :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is adorable. I am sure that I speak for everyone when I speak of missing those days. Back when things were easy and there were no cares.

Posted 13 Years Ago


aaww! that is so cute! i always love poem/stories about childhood!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I know how you feel

Posted 13 Years Ago



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