Thanks A Lot.

Thanks A Lot.

A Poem by +Naomi+

Thanks Silas.
Thanks A Lot.

I know I'm fat,
You don't have to rub it in.
I know I'm stupid,
You don't have to rub it in.
I know I'm better dead,
You don't have to rub it in.

Thanks for telling me
the exact number
of pills I'd need to overdose.

Thanks for telling me
what artery to hit next time I cut
just so I can bleed away my own life.

Thanks Silas.
Thanks a lot.
You're such a nice brother.

© 2011 +Naomi+


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Never listen to the negative things people have to say. You just have to remember that someone does love and care for you, whether you know it or not.


Posted 13 Years Ago


Naomi, my heart goes out to you! I cannot fathom why your own brother would be this cruel to you, his own sister. Do not listen to his malicious lies...and if you ever to want to just vent...please inbox me...I'm a good listener!

Posted 13 Years Ago


A spirited and resounding piece, well written, good read

Posted 13 Years Ago


Someone actually said exactly this to me today...

Posted 13 Years Ago


I agree with everything Cooki-Eater said >.< Silas is a dusche. Don't let him mess with you Naomi ):

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yes the sweet and kind family member. Brothers can be a two-sided sword. Some are wise and kind. Some are the pain in a young life. Only good part of living with a brother who is negative. Give you a head start on life. Negative will be no problem after living in a house with a pain in the butt. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'm going to state the obvious: Your brother's a dick -_-"
You're neither stupid nor fat.
Your brother also needs glasses.
I'd miss you if you die so don't attempt anything.
Tell your brother that I will beat the crap out of him if he ever messes with you, okay?

Posted 13 Years Ago



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