Just A Walk

Just A Walk

A Poem by +Naomi+

A swift walk with Yoko,
Four bullets to his chest...
He had taken the name Ono,
He was one of the best..

Why?
Ima cry.
December 8th the day was on,
when poor John was suddenly gone.

He took a step,
turned to the left,
and was caught by meek surprise.

He died...

© 2011 +Naomi+


Author's Note

+Naomi+
Okay, I know that not all four bullets hit his chest but...You get it xD

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He is missed and he won't ever be replaced. Thank you for reminding me of a great man. He stood for peace. He death I don't understand. A man of peace and love killed on his home doorstep. I will have to listen to his music today. Thank you for the excellent poem. We need to remember the good people who stood against a world in war.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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well done nice read good flow he is one of my fave artists



Posted 13 Years Ago


Very well done, the words flow seamlessly together.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Amazing write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


A torrid affair of slight emotion and relaxed anger well done, good read!

Posted 13 Years Ago


He is missed and he won't ever be replaced. Thank you for reminding me of a great man. He stood for peace. He death I don't understand. A man of peace and love killed on his home doorstep. I will have to listen to his music today. Thank you for the excellent poem. We need to remember the good people who stood against a world in war.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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+Naomi+

Chicago, IL



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