Hatred-

Hatred-

The way a war suddenly begins,

Leaving behind the whispering whimper of tortured souls.

Hatred-

The way blades of grass turn a yellow-green,

topped by a layer of cold, cold snow..

Hatred-

The way tears pour out of my eyes,

when I hear what you say behind my back.

Hatred-

The way her heart skipped a beat,

when she saw him with the other girl.

Hatred-

The way his fist comes in contact with her face,

all because of a stupid rumor they started about him.

Hatred-

It can't be stopped,

no matter how hard we try.

Reviews

[kaylynnmelody♥]

This is so moving!! Thank you for posting this piece!

[blue blue blue.]

This poem is all too true. I love how it deals with all aspects of life, instead of just one.

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. In love and basic life. Being angry is OK. When it come to large populations and Governments. Need to sit down and talk. Try to fix problems without choking a country wealth to war and death. A very strong poem. You open the door to many more questions. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kyla H]

Hmm, hate is such a strong word, to describe such a painful feeling. Well done though!!

[zendikar]

so true, but remember! at least we can do our best to control it within ourselves! very nice and powerful write :)

[Jess Holden]

I love this

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

I liked this piece
But im unsure on how to review

[DeadToTheWorld]

full of emotion this one...it was truly an amazing write...

[CharlesMonroe]

Very intense, very good. Love it (: great job

[Helpless]

wow... very intense. but fantastic work!