She'sGone.

Is this death?

My minds blank as you take my place.

Is this my fault?

My minds blank as you're carried away.

I black out slowly,

My eyelids shifting shut.

I awaken to the sound of a monitor.

Doctors rush to get you breathing again.

"She's not dead!"

I want to scream.

"Help her!"

Yet I can't scream.

I can't move.

I'm looking down upon her face.

Her piercing  eyes are open,

staring blankly at the ceiling.

No.

No, No, No!

I shut my eyes before. 

This is a dream!

A sick dream.

"She's alive!"

I tell myself...

Yet I know this isn't the truth.

She's gone.

I could've stopped her.

....

I didn't even get to say thank you.

Author's Note

Dedicated to Chloe...
I could've helped her.

..It's not the best...

Reviews

[kaylynnmelody♥]

Wow.. this was such a powerful write. it touched me deeply. thank you for the read request. keep writing!

[Coyote Poetry]

Life and death are held on a thread. Some mistakes can be costly. A very sad poem. To watch someone die is a hard thing. A strong poem with a sad story.
Coyote

[Jess Holden]

Don't live with regret. It will hurt you more than the loss of a loved one. Beautifully written, and full of emotion. Keep writing from the heart :)

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

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[HopelesslyDevoted]

wow

[JustNeedToBeHappy]

This is obviously very personal and therefore I won't try and analyze it. But this is a very good piece of work you have here hun :) Be proud of it.

[CharlesMonroe]

It's good (: very sad though, I like it Naomi. And smile, cause it'll be okay (: