How Would You Like It?

How Would You Like It?

A Poem by +Naomi+

How would you like it?

If you were caged up,

and poked with needles everyday.

How much would you hurt?

If the medication,

or make-up,

caused you pain?

How would you feel?

If you were just sitting there,

seeing your life roll away.

 

Stop Animal Testing.

Today.

© 2011 +Naomi+


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amen to that!!
stop animal cruelty!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I agree with your view. But science had more wealth and strength then we know. People have been fighting to protect animals for may years. A excellent poem with a powerful message. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

D:< Curse you animal testers; to the fiery pits of hell and then some! This is brilliant, really well written and everything is just perfect; I loved it! Great job, keep it up~

Posted 13 Years Ago


sad :(


Posted 13 Years Ago


great poetry :)

Fallen

Posted 13 Years Ago


i love this i agree with ashley myers on this

Posted 13 Years Ago


Send it in for a commercial lol. that would be commercial. love it

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh my god you are so right. we need to stop this now, and i mean it. you got a good topic, good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree this needs to be stopped.
Thanks for putting out the word Naomi.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

agreed, agreed, AGREED! :) as humas, we consider the drastic measures we resort to when finding cures to be worth the pain cost. But never do we imagine ourselves being the ones suffering. I loved this. Thanks for sharing

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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+Naomi+

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