How Would You Like It?

How would you like it?

If you were caged up,

and poked with needles everyday.

How much would you hurt?

If the medication,

or make-up,

caused you pain?

How would you feel?

If you were just sitting there,

seeing your life roll away.

 

Stop Animal Testing.

Today.

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

I have a slight editing to make on the last line.
'Stop testing people's lives.'

Not just animals are being provoked, caged, and experimented with nowadays.

Other than that, it was a plain but a powerful write. I could almost feel the syringe pricking my skin. Keep writing!

[Daydreamer54]

Aw, cute puppy! I like how it's so direct and gets to the point! Great write!

[Jonathan De Elvira]

I'm sure that I wouldn't like it if I'm the one in the cage...and sure as hell wouldn't like to see an animal being treated that way...imagine my fav pet bunny got locked inside awful cage and being poked without mercy?? No freaking way!! this was very thoughtful as well...thanks for sharing...

[Call Me Blu]

Hehe, I agree with ethan Castner, However I would test the testers. With slow acting poison! I was hurt by oeople at an early age, so I have a stronger love for animals, let their tormenters be tormented

[Ethan Castner]

**would never actually test on animals let alone humans**

[Ethan Castner]

i just came up with a plan to abduct the animal testers......and test.....THEM!!!!

[sorellaflowers]

Great poem short and to the point I like it, it's nice to read stuff about animal cruelty, it helps keep people aware, cheers to you(=

[SilentLullabies]

I agree, animal testing is very wrong. You did a great job getting your point across

[E.H. Monroe]

ahh. Do without the commercial at the end, Nom.
The message is loud and clear. Don't feed em, just let em bite it themselves. I'd say more images, skinned seals, etc. make the people FELL the pain, not think about it, yeah?

[D S Rollins]

Nice!