Seeing You...

When I walk down the hallways at school and see you,

I suck in a breath of air quick.

Your eyes wander toward me but find another girl...

I hate this.

Why can't I stand up for myself around you?

I feel like I'm stepping onto broken shards of glass.

Barefoot, each shard piecing my soul and skin.

I hate how you look at them,

as if you think it won't hurt me.

I was there when it happened,

I was there when you broke...

What happened though..?

What happened to us?

Author's Note

I read this book, and Im like, oh wth, and so i wrote this in my journal and perfected it today (it is SO not perfect tho...i suck at this)
Its is not based on me, just saying

Reviews

[Caitlynxoxo]

okay, you are wrong; this is absolutely perfect! There was such feeling and emotion in your words that I couldn't believe you hadn't expirienced something like this before! Suffice to say, i loved this poem :) Everything about it, from the metaphors used, to the longing in the narrarator's words. It was all just fantastic! Thanks for sharing

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[*skittlez*]

this is perfect i love it keep writing like this

[halflives]

This is actually quite good, making such lovely metaphors.
" I feel like I'm stepping onto broken shards of glass.
Barefoot, each shard piecing my soul and skin."
My favorite line. And I can relate too, very much so. Well done.

[jazmin]

cool!!! what book was it?

[Ashley]

wow this is wonderful

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

can totally to relate to what im going through.
i like it :)

[hello.im.aaron]

its good. i like