Me, Myself, and I--- My three best friends!

Me, Myself, and I--- My three best friends!

A Poem by +Naomi+
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yay!

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I smile at myself in the mirror,
looking at me.
I say to me "You're ugly."
I say to myself "You're pretty."

My three best friends,
they always fight with me.
They leave me to fight with myself,
who always has problems with I.

I smile again.
I say to myself 
"I am better than Me, Myself and You."
Am I you?
Is you I?

Oh, Damn!
Now I'm confused again..

© 2010 +Naomi+


Author's Note

+Naomi+
just a fun lil poem...

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Damn fingers can't ever made a decision. A very good poem. Ain't easy when we over think things. A fun poem to read. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting. Lol. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Amazing. I love the song too ;D

Posted 14 Years Ago


really interesting.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is really good. >.<
I really liked it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Really interesting and that last line made me chuckle, good job, keep it up~

Posted 14 Years Ago


interesting

Posted 14 Years Ago



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+Naomi+

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