I'm right here!

A short story about a blind girl, betrayl, and a cruel game of love and mercy.

I'm lost again, the darkness enveloping me. Stopping and feeling for a wall, I will guide myself. A high-pitched sound rings throughout the hallway. A giggle, I'm sure. I hear Josh, and.....a girl.  I feel sick to my stomach, he doesn't even know I'm here. The dark is piercing me, I want to see what's going on! I pray to god he'll let me see again, even if just a moment.

I clench my hands into small fists and find a railing. It guides me. I climb swiftly, trudging two steps at a time up the stairs. Finally, I reach the top and find Josh's door.

Giggles again. I'm right here Josh!!!

I see! Dark shapes moving, a boy and a girl. I switch on the light.

God shouldn't have let me see, I think.

I let out a scream. A long piercing scream.

Josh is there, but with another girl. He's hugging this girl. Kissing her.

When he does look up, he looks up in fearful amusment.

He thinks I can't see.

"I'M RIGHT HERE!" I scream. I disappear again though. The darkness folding around me. I toss around, trying to fight it. But it's there. The image I saw.

I feel Betrayed, fooled. I am. But I'm here. He can see me.

"I'm right here.." I whisper.

Author's Note

Don't know what in the world possessed me to write this but I don't ever delete my work so.....yea. enjoy!
PS-probably a lot og grammer mistakes in this. Ignore them

Reviews

[+Naomi+]

My new account is this one, Naomi233. I have 2 new "storys/poems" enjoy them if u chose to read them

[A.E. Reed]

I love the suspension and the first sentence really grabbed my attention. Real good XD

[Cafe Reader]

Great writing! Good set up and conclusion!

[Lia]

I think this a fantastic! I LOVE, LOVE, Love this! So much imagery in such a short piece. Your descriptions is brilliant, you draw the reader in and make them wanto follow you through the darkness. I hope you add to this! Well done, keep it up!