Why?

Why?

A Story by Naomi
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Why are we even here..?

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Why are we here? In the beginning, there was wilflife, growth everywhere... But look around NOW! Look at what we have done, what we destroyed. Look at the oceans, with it's filthy bottoms and brown waters! Look at the forests, with it's few standing trees! Look at what WE have done to this planet! In the past year....God how this makes me angry!! Look at what our selfishness has done to the poor creatures in the Gulf. The Oil that devoured them, it was OUR fault! OUR'S!! What have we done? I woke this morning in a grand mood, but having made myself look out the window, I realized what we've done. We've close to destroyed this planet. Our Home. Our Life. Ourselves......

Why?

© 2010 Naomi


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Naomi
I took out my anger by writing this. I wanted to write a good story but I ended up with this.

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That is what is so great about writing! And I completely feel the same way! But the pen is mightier... so hopefully writing will help to change us and our world! Welcome to the cafe, hope you enjoy!

I'm an English teacher, so just wanted to point out...
Look at the oceans, with it's (their) filthy bottoms and brown waters! Look at the forests, with it's (their) few standing trees! them, it was OUR fault! OUR'S!!(ours)
:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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That is what is so great about writing! And I completely feel the same way! But the pen is mightier... so hopefully writing will help to change us and our world! Welcome to the cafe, hope you enjoy!

I'm an English teacher, so just wanted to point out...
Look at the oceans, with it's (their) filthy bottoms and brown waters! Look at the forests, with it's (their) few standing trees! them, it was OUR fault! OUR'S!!(ours)
:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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