Blissful Tears

The gulls chatter in the firaments...
Ferverent to greet the dawn.
Blessed dew drops licked at each blade of grass...
Crawling upon its surface in beads of glee.

I stand here, relishing in the tenderness of each ray.
Jaded eyes, take in the indigo heavens, and the subtle caress of the wind.
Seasoned feet stand, planted on this unyeilding rock, encircled in the waves
of Nature's discarded tears.

Tis not long, that my lungs ache,
to liberate the wind trapped in my core.
And so...I set it free...and on the wings of that breath,
Rests a smile of tranquility, wafting into the whispering wind.

With this voice of bliss...
I call to the gulls...
"Take this heart of congealed love...and let it flutter,
upon your wings, to embrace each golden beam in the azure sky..."

And so, unto the rays, this heart is delivered...
And each golden ray from above, shall pierce the night with in me.
That light, that overwhelming light...
Will awaken the tears that have longed to spill
from the windows of my soul...

Now, Nature and I share the secret behind
The authentic value...
of the indigo sky.
And she and I, will taste the salt, of each other's tears.

Reviews

[Gordon]

Very good... great visuals. I really like the spoken words and the moment of deliverence,

I call to the gulls...
"Take this heart of congealed love...and let it flutter,
upon your wings, to embrace each golden beam in the azure sky..."

One little edit thingy: I think the use of the word "within" is what you mean to use here;
"shall pierce the night with in me" (but it's just a minor error, just in case you have it published)

I noticed in both your pieces i've read that you use alot of "..." and while I think it's fine to use, I think you should be more careful when to use them. I use them time to time but only as a symbol of drifting thought or a bridge to a new one. Just my opinion though... and it's not worth much. :)