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Lots of stuff going on recently. Written about that

I cried every last tear for you

Breathed every last breath for you

But it wasn’t enough

But now that I’m here I can’t seem to let it go

And it hurts

God it hurts so much

Just to stand there and watch

 

But I’m not him

And I never will be

But that doesn’t matter

Because I never had a chance

Everything I tried was pointless

I will just go on living in this pain

But for how long

We will see

 

And now I know

That the hardest part of loving you

Is wanting you to be happy

Whether I’m with you or not

Reviews

[These Haunted Hallways]

Woh! Again, you have intrigued me with your words. I thought that this was really awesome. Heartfelt, genuine; very powerful and emotional statements. There are times like these that really bring folks down to the ground. It's never your fault. Although it is a blow to the face, we have to get up and dust ourselves off to commence again. In doing this, it builds strength, endurance, and confidence. Though it is heartbreaking, this poem, know that u are not alone, and that you will overcome this obstacle; not because you are strong, but because you have a good heart. And it is in the right place. Good luck to you. This was very well done, sir :)

B.A.

[topsyturvy]

*tear* i know the feeling nana!! very well composed!