So Far Gone

Meh

 

I can’t stop looking back

To the times

When I was your everything

When you were my everything

But here I am

On my own

A truth I can’t refuse

But I’m happy

A lie I can’t refuse

 

You’re so far gone

So far gone, gone, gone

So out of touch

Out of reach

I’m left behind again

While you take off with him

 

I just wanna go back

To those times

But now he’s your everything

And you are his everything

So here I’ll lie

All alone and crushed inside

A truth I can’t refuse

But I’m happy

A lie I can’t refuse

 

You’re so far gone

So far gone, gone, gone

So out of touch

Out of reach

I’m left behind again

While you take off with him

 

What did I do

To make you turn your back on me

And leave me broke

While you’re still whole

I can’t see far past my jaded eyes

As I stare into yours

 

You’re so far gone

So far gone, gone, gone

So out of touch

Out of reach

I’m left behind again

While you take off with him

 

Reviews

[Philosophile. (Maddy)]

I found this to be lyrical also. I could almost imagine a singer wailing about the pain of lost love. I could really feel the emotion in this!

[Volges]

Neatly, written it's wrote as if it was meant to be a song. I enjoy the piece overall
Nicely Done.

[Zane Mathias]

wow dude much sadness and even tho she moved on people never truly forget you. nobody can ever truly forget anything it just lies dormid for a while.. Great write dude

[Damien Dsoul]

There's always a pain that exists after a heart is broken. Though often it's best appreciating such thought and feeling when it's a female writing it, but even with this one, the feeling works quite well. Sad, and full of nostalgia. It hurts deep.

[Sarah]

The repetition in this piece works really well & reiterates the sorrow you feel. Great job. ^_^