Elemental Series 1 of 4- Rain

I decided to start a series about elements. I haven't been writing much lately and needed some inspiration. So when it started raining outside, it hit me like a giant pile of bricks in the face.

The rain falls like the tears of a fallen angel

Full of remorse and regret

Hitting the ground like casings from a soldiers gun

Full of hatred and sadness

Falling apart like an unfinished puzzle before an impatient master

Full of frustration and madness

Neverending like a blind man lecturing a deaf child

Full of irritation and annoyance

Darkening my day like the shade from a tree

Full of darkness and blankness

Leaving me wanting like when you left me

Full of lust and despair

Disappearing like a phantom from another realm

Full of nothingness and emptiness

Reviews

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

What a wonderful creative way of describing the rain....a great choice in words.

[These Haunted Hallways]

Ooo, this is definitley one i can relate to, truly. I feel this way pretty much everyday. It sucks so much, and ur like trapped inside ur own head, and can never break free at all. Very heartfelt and definite. Awesome!

B.A.

[Zane Mathias]

wow love the meaniing behind this. keep up the great job.