Lonely here
A Poem by
Nancy
My heart
Bleeds with every
Tear that falls
My hand
Shakes
but there is
No one to hold it steady
Its lonely here
Waiting
For you to come back
Pleading
With my soul
Please come home.
© 2010 Nancy
Reviews
u expressed the heart and soul loneliness so well-Great poem!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Besides love, lonliness is a powerful feeling that inflicts itself who loves and wants to be loved. Sometimes we are blessed with being loved, yet many times we are always in want. As Coyote mentioned, a powerful and execellent poem. Again Good Job!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Besides love, lonliness is a powerful feeling that inflicts itself who loves and wants to be loved. Sometimes we are blessed with being loved, yet many times we are always in want. As Coyote mentioned, a powerful and execellent poem. Again Good Job!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I know this feeling. Alone and trying to find purpose to move on. A powerful poem. You said a lot in so few words. A excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 14 Years Ago
I know this feeling. Alone and trying to find purpose to move on. A powerful poem. You said a lot in so few words. A excellent poem.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on November 7, 2010
Last Updated on November 7, 2010
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Nancy Richmond, KY
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