DUST

DUST

The dust has begun to settle Eyes cloud over with poor judgment. Feelings reverberate back to their beginning. One could draw a line in this accumulation there is no crossing.

NANCYMCCORMACK

Reviews

[sharonlee]

A haunting quality to this that sets my thoughts adrift... bravo.

[NANCY MCCORMACK]

thank you very much, I did take out 2 words and 2 letters and like this much better :) I really dislike editing my writing it drives me bonkers.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words.
"Eyes clouded over with poor judgment."
You gave the word "Dust". A reason. The above line I like a lot. Clouded eyes can make us do things we shouldn't. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[NANCY MCCORMACK]

Hi there! and thanks so much for the read, I think there is a line I will take out :)