SOFT FACE

soft face

the soft face of a lover scrapes if not taken care eyes so piercing bleed when one is unaware heart so strong now so weak when you last placed your lips on my cheek

NANCYMCCORMACK

Reviews

[J. J. Nightingale]

This is good .. ..


Reads soft and real.............. Jazzy

[NANCY MCCORMACK]

hi there! and thank you for stopping , thank you so much for the in put.I read it and re read it , with that suggestion and I just do not care for it , "where you last placed your lips on my cheek" sounds very odd to me, there is no need to say where since I am already saying that with the word "cheeks " :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

I think you are correct .. forgive this old lady .. I misread ..I read "heart" and "Heat" ..lol .. sorry ........... very well done.... Jazz

[NANCY MCCORMACK]

no need to forgive an old lady as I am an old lady,,ha :)
thank you for reading, have been here a lot today stopping in for a bit then off again.having this and that to do :) in between. I had been away for a bit.

[J. J. Nightingale]

I bet you are not as old as me ..lol ..................... Your pic looks very young :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. You create thoughts and sadness using so few words. We do miss the simple things when love goes away. A warm embrace and soft kiss become a valuable part of life needed and missed. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[NANCY MCCORMACK]

thank you once again, and I sometimes have a hard time here it seems to take a while to load and I have to log out and all kinds of crap either my comment is lost or whatever, but thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm somehow always logged in. Easy to write. This site take a lot of room. I clean-up the excess daily.