A MEMORYS CLOSET POEM TRAUMA RECOGNITION I fell down again into trauma recognition. My past escaped, and caught up with me. With no buffer between me and reality, Using would be an option. I’m so clean. I have nothing. What does one call the ache when it reaches Back to childhood? The camouflage is unbearable But necessary.
This is superb piece of writing and deeply honest, thank you for sharing!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
thank you for taking the time to stop and read! I have a tendency to take breaks from here and pop i.. read morethank you for taking the time to stop and read! I have a tendency to take breaks from here and pop in here and there, I really appreciate the time you took to stop here , again thank you.
Very good use of words. A lot of hidden meaning and memory in your words. Closing lines allowed the reader to find some kind of understanding. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
thank you so nice to see you again! I know I can add description to these, but I feel if any reader.. read morethank you so nice to see you again! I know I can add description to these, but I feel if any reader can find something in a poem they are reading of mine and connect with it in there own way , then even if it is not my intent , then it is a good connection :) and that is why I would rather not use the description , before a write
thank you for the time you were here!
10 Years Ago
I agree. Need to make the reader use their imagination and thoughts. I was glad to see your name app.. read moreI agree. Need to make the reader use their imagination and thoughts. I was glad to see your name appear on the board for new poetry.
10 Years Ago
why thank you, I have a tendency to take long breaks and I do miss the writing , there is fb, as wel.. read morewhy thank you, I have a tendency to take long breaks and I do miss the writing , there is fb, as well
I quit school between grade 10 and 11.
I never learned how to drive.
I do not know anything about
Poetry and writing accept that
I LIKE IT.
I do not write by form or rules
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