The Usual Appointment

The examination of your head is scheduled

a clear image is predictable

many delays

if we find it early

we may save your life

your life of discontent

your sorry hours

your failed wires

the nuns will be sure to bless you

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I felt the sarcasm of the narrator in the usual appointment...A splendid read and write...:)..............

[AK]

This is a very interesting piece indeed! I'm still trying to figure out what exactly you mean (I am clearly not the brightest of the lot) but I love how you quip very smartly. The tablespoon of sarcasm (unless I got that wrong) amuses me. What does one do if there are delays when found early?
Great write, keep writing!

[Nance]

Oh this was written on one of those days when life can take an unexpected turn …another sorted step along the way! Yes it is sarcastic and I always have an interest in delays. Thank you for your input : )

[AK]

Just reread the poem, it makes a lot more sense with your explanation! Thanks for sharing this piece!