No Choice

No Choice

A Poem by Miss Carmine
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From my old account 'ForbiddenLovers' Sometimes feelings don't let you chose

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People scorn

They all tell me I’m foolish

And that it’s time to move on

From the old memories

That haunt me

Of you

Of us

They roll their eyes

And think I cause the drama myself

I don’t think they understand

I don’t think you understand

I don’t chose this

The pain you’ve caused

Is not a choice

In my heart

I can’t stop loving you

Because I don’t think anyone understands

If I could I would drop my love

For you

Right now

And forget all about you

Because I would have to be crazy

To chose this pain

© 2008 Miss Carmine


Author's Note

Miss Carmine
Sometimes feelings don't give you a choice

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Again you weave a masterful work with such powerful emotion. The feelings depicted are ones that I feel most people can relate to, I know I myself can relate to them. People tell you to move on, and you yearn for nothing more, for those old feelings to no longer matter, but despite how hard you try, sometimes your heart and your mind decides to hold on to those old memories and feelings, giving you no choice but to recount the love that you once had and remember the feelings you try so hard to forget.

Well written, I truly liked this piece. You are quick becoming one of my favourite writers here. Bravi.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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EXACTLY i would love to be able to like read this poem to people who give me s**t about stuff and i just wanna be like dudeee feelings take over sometimes its not my choice!

ahhh

lol awesome job though really! very powerful

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Again you weave a masterful work with such powerful emotion. The feelings depicted are ones that I feel most people can relate to, I know I myself can relate to them. People tell you to move on, and you yearn for nothing more, for those old feelings to no longer matter, but despite how hard you try, sometimes your heart and your mind decides to hold on to those old memories and feelings, giving you no choice but to recount the love that you once had and remember the feelings you try so hard to forget.

Well written, I truly liked this piece. You are quick becoming one of my favourite writers here. Bravi.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Miss Carmine
Miss Carmine

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I am me. I'm not a click, or a genre. I am not a time and I am not a fad. I like art- like reading, writing, and music. I am not beautiful yet I am not ugly but my true beauty rests on the inside. Lov.. more..

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