"Committed Relationship"

"Committed Relationship"

A Poem by Ahmed Namisa Alam
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~When one door closes, another opens~

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You let it go.
You watch it leave,
And soon, let it fade in the dust.
You lose it.
You lose your friendship.

But,

At the same time,
You see it coming.

Stomping right at you.
Staring you down, 
And promising a fully committed relationship that you blindly accept.

Once you lose friendship,
You develop a relationship.

A committed relationship with Pain.

© 2020 Ahmed Namisa Alam


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Ahmed Namisa Alam
been a long time I've posted here.

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I dance when I realise that something of mine is lost for good and I'm to be happy!
Pains a bit though. If we prevent sufferings and gaze away from all the nasty agonies, we'll lose the only few crazy feelings left on earth. Good litte write!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Ahmed Namisa Alam

4 Years Ago

pain is not what hurts us and kills us. It is what heals us and evolves us. I'm glad you understand .. read more

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Added on May 23, 2020
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Tags: pain, poem, let go, inspiration, truth

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Ahmed Namisa Alam
Ahmed Namisa Alam

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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